Talk:Pentecost

Simplification

This page just isn't simple english - have a look at the opening sentence! A check with some tools gives the following data: Indication of the number of years of formal education that a person requires in order to easily understand the text on the first reading: Gunning Fog index: 20.48

Approximate representation of the U.S. grade level needed to comprehend the text : Coleman Liau index : 14.20 Flesh Kincaid Grade level : 20.20 ARI (Automated Readability Index) : 20.74 SMOG : 18.17

I have had a look - but what a good simple way for describing liturgy for example. Any one want to try? Peterdownunder (talk) 07:22, 27 November 2008 (UTC)

Well, I've made changes. It may not be as simplified as it should be, but it's better than it was. --Musdan77 (talk) 01:32, 17 April 2012 (UTC)